Comments on: Short Fiction http://journal.busydoingnothing.net it's a regular surplus of free time Tue, 07 Jul 2009 13:52:40 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Mel http://journal.busydoingnothing.net/short-fiction/comment-page-1#comment-32 Mel Fri, 12 Oct 2007 13:06:41 +0000 http://www.busydoingnothing.net/short-fiction/#comment-32 Jim, I have just read 'remembering how to cry'. Absolutely love it. Great pace, and you can really see how the characters could be developed in a longer version. Unexpected end to an age old story - boy has girl, boy loses girl etc.. Love it. Looking forward to reading the otehrs - but i have to work!! Sorry I havent been intouch - crazy ex hacking my emails and stuff, hope all is okay with you. xxx Jim, I have just read ‘remembering how to cry’.

Absolutely love it. Great pace, and you can really see how the characters could be developed in a longer version. Unexpected end to an age old story – boy has girl, boy loses girl etc..

Love it. Looking forward to reading the otehrs – but i have to work!!

Sorry I havent been intouch – crazy ex hacking my emails and stuff, hope all is okay with you.

xxx

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